The Unnoticeables

Robert Brockway
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The Unnoticeables: A Novel

Aspanna
9/14/2015
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An amazing premise. The story is so weird and spooky I loved the hell out of it. But... the author's humor, sex, and gore craze got in the way. Don't get me wrong. I was peeing my pants laughing with the "Daisy" parts. I was scared and disgusted by the Empty Ones. And the sex was disturbing to say the least. But I felt the writing style would be more appreciated by male readers. This Carter dude and his gang... too many dick and/or beer jokes! If you get past the first chapters as a female reader you are in for a treat. The story really deserves the effort.