Out of Body

I enjoyed this story well enough, but didn't feel particularly moved by it or engrossed in it. It reads a bit like the worldbuilding setup for an RPG -- or perhaps more like an excerpt of a full-length novel, rather than a full-fledged story on its own -- and I felt detached from the characters. There's a bit of commentary here on the human tendency to voyeurism, and whether that is a good or a bad thing. Fans of paranormal horror may enjoy this.