justifiedsinner
4/3/2016
Told from multiple points of view in a dense invented jargon. Too many characters especially since they didn't seem all that distinct from one another. They are all artists, hippies, drug addicts and similar outsiders which are much cooler than the corporate types that are the antagonists but for contrast a few uncool types would have wortked better
. At one time it may have been worth the effort to continue until clarity ensues but the technology is so dated that at 104 pages in I decided not to bother.
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